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Short Script: Max Payne 2: The Fall of Max Payne

Last time I was here, doing a short script for the first Max Payne, I mentioned that I had a stock rant about linearity in games but wasn’t going to bring it up because Max Payne provides a poor example. Now, however, I’m dealing with Max Payne 2, which fits much better, so hold on while I get this bee out of my bonnet.

For a long time now, linearity has been regarded as something of a gaming sin. And there are certainly reasonable arguments to be made against it. After all, interactivity is supposed to be gaming’s thing. If you remove player freedom and exploration, force the player to follow explicit directions every step of the way, you might as well just be watching a movie, right?

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Short Script: Call of Duty: Ghosts

In the opening narration to the final mission of Call of Duty: Ghosts, David Walker says the following of his father: “Dad taught us many things, but one lesson always stood out. Good men are defined by the choices they make.” That line feels like a slap in the face from a game that forgets the step forward that Black Ops 2 dared to take and just focuses on a painfully linear experience entirely devoid of choice. It doesn’t even try to use that linearity to its advantage, like the first two Modern Warfare games did (at times). Above all, Call of Duty: Ghosts feels lazy.

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Short Script: Max Payne

Hello, people visiting Playthroughline! My name is Craig and I’m an author of abridged scripts on The Editing Room, where Joannes’ movie parodies are published. Joannes has kindly allowed me to contribute a Short Script to his site, and I have chosen the classic third-person shooter Max Payne.

I was originally going to use this space here to go through one of my recurring video game rants, to be specific, a defence of linear gameplay. After all, games don’t come much more linear than Max Payne. But the thrust of that particular rant is the idea of tight narrative focus, and in abridging Max Payne, one thing I realised was that “tight narrative focus” is not a term you’d use to describe it at all. If it were to focus on its story, it’d probably last about half an hour. Instead it rambles, inventing an endless series of feeble justifications for action set pieces which have nothing whatsoever to do with the central story. The restaurant fire, the robbery of the Charon, the parking garage showdown, the hotel drug deal, all of these things and more could be lifted right out and you’d hardly notice the difference.

And the more I thought about it, the more this little diatribe changed its topic to the bewildering question: why in the world do I like this game so much?

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From deconstructing narratives to designing one

Woolfe: The Red Hood Diaries. Not narrated by David Duchovny (sadly).

Woolfe: The Red Hood Diaries. Not narrated by David Duchovny (sadly).

It appears I’ve been running this little blog for four years this month. Please join me in a celebratory nod as a distraction from the recent lack of updates. At least I have a series of valid excuses this time. I’ve spent a month in America! I’ve moved house! And pretty much the most exciting development of all: I can actually call myself a narrative designer now! For the last two months, I’ve been working closely with the Antwerp-based studio GriN on a game called Woolfe. It’s an episodic platformer/brawler set in the Red Riding Hood fairy tale, but with that customary dark twist thrown in. I’m currently in charge of finetuning an already established story foundation and writing dialogue and voice-over elements. The first trailer is below the jump.

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Short Script: Spec Ops: The Line

Thanks to the Steam Summer Sale, I finally got to play Spec Ops: The Line, the 2012 takedown of the military shooter genre. There’s a reason it’s now the shortest script on the blog, and it’s not that I needed a breather after writing the longest. Spec Ops: The Line is anything but a breather and finding a workable angle for its Short Script proved to be quite a challenge.

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Short Script: BioShock Infinite

I figured the BioShock Infinite Short Script would be a sizable one and as it turns out, it’s officially overtaken Deus Ex: Human Revolution as the longest one on the blog. There is evidently a lot to say about the game, which is obvious from even the most cursory search for critical articles. I reviewed the game for BeefJack and declared it a masterpiece, which it really is. The imagination and the production values to back it up are palpable and I was more often than not flat-out amazed during my playthrough. That said, there are some problems with the union of story and gameplay in Infinite. Much like Columbia itself, you’ll find plenty of things wrong with it once you peel back the shiny veneer.

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Short Script: Dead Space 3

When talking about Dead Space 2, I mentioned how it focused more on cinematic action when compared to its predecessor. Dead Space 3 turns that evolution up to eleven and goes all-out on the bombast. With the addition of (among others) co-op functionality, microtransactions and weapon crafting, Dead Space 3′s kitchen-sink approach waters down the constituent elements that made the first Dead Space stand out from the crowd. While at times an entertaining shooter in its own right, it has been transformed to exactly that: a shooter.

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Short Script: Dishonored

And we’re back! Again! With a Short Script of a game that came out last October! The game did take away the BAFTA for Best Game last week, so I am on top of things! Anyways, I’ve had great fun with Dishonored, as it’s a game that places player agency front and centre. As a result, a hell of a lot has been written about its themes, mechanics, and approach to morality. I think you’ll have gathered from this blog that I pay special attention to narrative, which I find lacking in Dishonored, but understandably so. Dishonored’s story is really an easel, there to support a blank canvas which you can paint how you like (i.e. with blood or not).

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Short Script: Call of Duty: Black Ops 2

I could open this post with an obligatory excuse regarding the lack of updates. I could do that. I can also just go ahead and direct you to the Short Script for Call of Duty: Black Ops 2 by clicking the link above. Or you can read it over at BeefJack, where it has pictures breaking up the monotony of a wall of text now and then. You can totally choose for yourself, which is something Treyarch tried to implement in the singleplayer campaign of Black Ops 2.

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Short Script: Mass Effect 3

At long last, the Mass Effect 3 Short Script is here. It also happens to be the 25th script I’ve written, which probably marks some kind of jubilee. You’ll find it on BeefJack once more by clicking the link above. Regarding the game and its controversy, I find myself in agreement with Mike Krahulik of Penny Arcade, who claims that Mass Effect 3 doesn’t have a shitty ending, it is the ending. The entire Mass Effect series comes to an close with this game, not just in its final minutes. So even if you think the ending sucks noodles, the other 95% of the game is still awesome. I think it’s an amazing game that’s not undone by its conclusion.

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